once upon a time , there was a little poor boy came into a little village . He was very hungry and weak .He knocked at very door and asked for some food , but nobody care about him. Nobody wanted to help the little boy.Finally, a generous woman helped him. She gave him shelter and meal. When the boy wanted to leave, this old woman gave him a "lesung" , a big wooden mortal pounding rice. She reminded him, "please remember , if there is a flood you must save yourself. Use this"lesung as the boat". the boy came closer and saw a stick stuck in the ground. People challenged each other to pull out that stick. Everybody tried , but nobody succeeded. "Can I try ?" Asked the little boy. The crowd laughed mockingly. The boy wanted to try his luck so he stepped forward and pulled out the stick. He could do it very easily. Everybody was dumbfounded. suddenly, from the hole left by stick, water spouted out. It did not stop until it flooded the village. And no one was saved from the water except the little boy and the generous old woman who gave him shelter and meal. As she told him, he used the "lesung" as a boat and picked up.
Coda : Everyone should help each other and don't underestimate other by looking at his just body.
I think it would be better if you dividing this one big paragraph into a few of paragraphs.
BalasHapusUpperward on the first word of paragraph : "Once"
BalasHapusYou should separate it into paragraphs.