Minggu, 01 Maret 2020

Alun - Alun' s pekalongan

                          Visiting Alun- Alun's pekalongan
       In my city , in alun - Alun's park where is cheapest barber in under beringin tree. Buyyer the cheapest book , magazine and dictionary too . book such as translate of dream , recipe for cooking , dictionary , magazine and etc.
Seller pecel , chicken pourige . In that field we are can played football , badminton , hide and seek.
         In the evening , there are many children with his or her parents by motorcycle , bike and light pedicap , etc.
In this park many teeners played roller skate while his or her parents shutdown around them , beside them, the seller crowded with their buyyer.
          Every Sunday I with my family go there on foot , because my house near the Alun - Alun pekalongan . My little brother very nice to played there.
          We had best experiences. It was an unforgettable experience.

     



3 komentar:

  1. Should at the beginning of the orientation sentence use adverb of time, for example "last week" which explains the events that have occurred(past tense). Because the characteristics of the recount text that is using the past tense sentence and used adverb of time, such as last and ago.

    BalasHapus
  2. You should translate beringin tree into Banyan Tree 😆

    BalasHapus
  3. You should explain it more detail about the alun-alun park.
    Beringin tree : banyan tree

    BalasHapus